tell me what you think about this poem, i just wrote this so i dont know if it sucks balls.....
my soul is untrained against all these emotions.
i feel love, i feel pain, i feel what you may never feel.
i try to go on and fight, but god its useless.
these feelings they're worthless, they're killing me.
as i succumb to all these feelings, i remain strong.
not for you and not for them, but for myself.
myself who is all i need to care about.
no one understands my beliefs, no one.
it seems that i am all alone with no one by my side.
i have nothing to live for, nothing at all but to see you die.
nothing at all but to see you die.... my love......
6/7/09